This video shows the first edit which included a backing track and sound effects, after discussing at watching back I decided to edit further and change around the sound and add a end title to enhance the overall opening sequence.
Filmed by Ellie Rackham
Edited by Ben Homewood
This second video shows my improvements through editing. I changed around some sounds and I make the "mystery sound" at the end longer and faded into the title of the film. I also added a footstep sound at the end to add tension. This will provide the audience with something they will want to figure out and get hooked onto.