Individual Rough Edit of Opening Sequence to a Thriller - Ellie Rackham

This is my rough copy of an opening sequence to a Thriller. There are a few improvements that I need to make such as, the shadows of the filming crew and other footage such as close ups of a couple of actors.

Individual Rough Cut - The Case - Ben Homewood

http://youtu.be/hejBU_m6jqY

Above is my individual rough cut edit, I have produced my first edit of my opening scene.
I will be getting feedback and improvements which I can apply to further enhance my opening scene.To enhance my opening scene I will be adding effects, better title slates and sound improvements like sound effects and ambience.